It's a great drawing but I see why your disappointing with it. First, the eyes are too large. He looks a bit shocked as well as intrigued by whatever he's looking at. If you look at the original makeup, you will notice that his eyes are further back than on a real person. This is because of the additional latex added to the actor's skin. Although not intentional, it gives a sunken look to his eyes that only adds to his disturbing appearance.
The other part that is off, lies only in the lower half. The arm and body are too cramped. this makes it look flat. Due to the horizontal stripes on his shirt, the vertical boarder lines make a boxed in look that limits the perception of anything continuing outside of the edges. The viewer sees the drawing as stopping at the lines.
-be aware that what I am doing is trying to give some constructive criticism.
shit, i was doing some reserch, i thought that the diredtor for killer clowns was the guy who did jeeper creepers! shows what i know huh? ive refused all these years to watch killer klowns on the soul fact that the director was a pedophile, but it turns out the director was a totally differant guy. still, no one ask me to draw the thing from jeepers creepers,,, [link]
wait, what about the director being a pedo?! I never heard about that...time to wiki, I guess. As for Freddy, Chest o' Souls (sounds like a breakfast cereal, lol) version sounds the best bet. Has the most aesthetic appeal, at least to me.